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Band 5+: Describe a family member you admire

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I want to talk about my mom. My mom is not like everyone else. She always supports me and provides everything a person needs in this world. She gives me different perspectives and advice. Even more friends invite me because my mom and I are like best friends. Thank you, mom, for everything.

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I want to tell about my mom. My mom is not like everyone else. She always supports my super protection and everything that one person needs in this world. She always supports me and gives me a different attitude and advice. Even more friends invite me because my mom and me like best friends. Thank you, mom and everything for everything.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

everything: 2

friends: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

This is a good start to describing a family member you admire. To improve, consider adding more specific examples of your mother's support, advice, and the ways in which your friendship is unique. Elaborating on these points with concrete details and anecdotes will make your response more compelling and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight lack of fluency due to some hesitations and slightly unnatural phrasing. Consider pausing slightly more between sentences for better pacing and clarity. The conclusion feels a bit abrupt.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "super protection" are a little unusual and could be replaced with more precise language. A wider range of vocabulary would enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as the use of "super protection" and the slightly awkward phrasing of "my mom and me". While the overall message is clear, improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the score. Consider reviewing subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage.

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