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Band 5+: Describe a family member you like to work with in future

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We are a family business. It is quite common in my country for family members to work together as a unit. If given the chance, I would like to work with my brother. Actually, I have been at AMT for a long time. I set up an education show with my brother. Together we can create success. Unfortunately, in the area we live in, the education standards are very poor. She is a mother who raised two children and has a significant amount of money. She has never completely talked about anything related to it.

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We are the family business. It is quite common in my country in which family members work together as a unit. If you give them the chance, I would like to work with my brother. Actually, it is my long time at AMT. I set up an education show with my brother. Together we can create a success. Unfortunately, the area we live in, the education standards are very poor. She is a mother who raised two children, and she has a significant amount of money. She has never completely talked about anything to do with it.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

family: 2

together: 2

brother: 2

education: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

4.5

The response is partially relevant to the topic but lacks detail and coherence. Consider expanding on your brother's skills and how your combined strengths would contribute to a successful work environment. More specific examples of past collaborations and future goals would strengthen the response. The inclusion of seemingly unrelated information about your mother detracts from the overall focus. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the connection between the different parts is not always clear. There are some instances of repetition and self-correction. Improving the flow of ideas and using smoother transitions would enhance fluency. The final sentences about the mother seem unrelated to the main topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated or precise. Words like "significant amount of money" could be replaced with more specific and impactful vocabulary. More precise language would elevate the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect preposition usage ("in which family members work together as a unit" should be "where family members work together as a unit") and sentence structure issues. The final sentences are grammatically correct but lack relevance. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the score.

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