Part 2

Band 5+: Describe a family member you like to work with in future

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

57% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

We are a family business. It is quite common in my country for family members to work together as a unit. If given the chance, I would like to work with my brother. Actually, I have been at AMT for a long time. I set up an education show with my brother. Together we can create success. Unfortunately, in the area we live in, the education standards are very poor. She is a mother who raised two children and has a significant amount of money. She has never completely talked about anything related to it.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

We are the family business. It is quite common in my country in which family members work together as a unit. If you give them the chance, I would like to work with my brother. Actually, it is my long time at AMT. I set up an education show with my brother. Together we can create a success. Unfortunately, the area we live in, the education standards are very poor. She is a mother who raised two children, and she has a significant amount of money. She has never completely talked about anything to do with it.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 38 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

family: 2

together: 2

brother: 2

education: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

4.5

The response is partially relevant to the topic but lacks detail and coherence. Consider expanding on your brother's skills and how your combined strengths would contribute to a successful work environment. More specific examples of past collaborations and future goals would strengthen the response. The inclusion of seemingly unrelated information about your mother detracts from the overall focus. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the connection between the different parts is not always clear. There are some instances of repetition and self-correction. Improving the flow of ideas and using smoother transitions would enhance fluency. The final sentences about the mother seem unrelated to the main topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated or precise. Words like "significant amount of money" could be replaced with more specific and impactful vocabulary. More precise language would elevate the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect preposition usage ("in which family members work together as a unit" should be "where family members work together as a unit") and sentence structure issues. The final sentences are grammatically correct but lack relevance. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly improve the score.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

I want to learn to work with the future if my teacher, she had a way of being the ruler of my mode for me. My sister wants to say for me she is very interesting, but the future is very interesting for me. My sister is very ambitious and very hungry for me and […]

Band 4+

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

Working alongside a family member is truly a privilege that not only many people experience, I believe it can lead to a wonderfully enriching experience both personally and professionally in many cultures, especially in India. It’s common for younger generations to take over family businesses. This not only preserves family traditions but also gives a […]

Band 8+

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

You know it’s always great if you get chance to work with your idol. So in future if I had chance to work with one of my family member it would be definitely my father as I admire him a lot. In addition to this when I was in my elementary school I used to […]

Band 7+

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

A family member I love to work with in the future is my cousin. He is an accountant with deep knowledge of taxation. His expertise in the field is inspiring and he always showed me how to engage in this field. He taught me some complex courses in accounting such as mathematics, financial accounting, taxation […]

Band 7+

See All

Describe a time when you saw something that you could not explain. You should say: what you saw, where and when you saw it, who you were with, and explain why you could not explain it.

I would like to talk about time when I saw something that I can’t explain it which happened one years ago. It’s happened in a company that manufacture an atomic bomb and what I saw there I couldn’t explain it because it is it It was too complicated process and how the atomic bomb it […]

Band 5+

Tell me about a person who is your inspiration.

I would like to talk about my father who is one of the most important person in my life. My father has been supporting me also, guide me since I was child. I have spent my entire life with him so I know his personality and character quite well. He is a hard working and […]

Band 7+

Describe a person Who works in a successful company.

Getting successful is not a piece of cake for everyone. It demands dedication and hard work. In today’s fires competitive era. So today I would like to talk about a person who works in a successful company. He is my cousin. His name is Shabnur. He is very confident and hard worker. So, he is […]

Band 6+

See All

Band 5+: Describe a family member you like to work with in future

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

Describe a family member you like to work with in future

Other Topics:

Describe a time you changed your mind about something significant. You should say: - What you initially believed - What caused you to change your mind - What the new belief is And explain how this change has affected you.

Describe an interesting traditional story. You should say: 🟠 what it is about 🟠 how you knew it, who told you the story 🟠 how you felt when you first heard it and explain why this story is memorable to you.

Describe a place you visited that had a surprising atmosphere or vibe. You should say: - Where it was - What you expected it to be like - Why the atmosphere was surprising And explain how it made you feel.

Describe a time when you saw something that you could not explain. You should say: what you saw, where and when you saw it, who you were with, and explain why you could not explain it.

Tell me about a person who is your inspiration.

Describe a person Who works in a successful company.

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium