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Band 6+: Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: - What the goal is - Why you want to achieve it - What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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As for me, I just finished my university and graduated. I have many goals that I really want to achieve, but the nearest one is to start my own brand because I completed my fashion design degree. I want to start my fashion brand, and I will begin by creating a fashion mood board that I want to draw for the target audience and send a garment sample that I am starting to look for. It is quite challenging. There are a lot of challenges for me because I have to communicate with the factories, many factories, to learn about details, fabrications, and everything. This goal is really important to me.

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As for me, I just finished my university and I just graduated. So I have so many goals that I really want to achieve but then for the nearest one is I really want to start my own brand because I finished with my fashion design. So I really want to start my fashion brand and I will start doing some sort of fashion move board that I want to draw for the target audience and send a fashion sample like a garment sample that I start looking for it. It is kind of quite challenging. There is a lot of quite challenging for me because I have to communicate with the fat tree, fat trees, a lot of fat tree because I want to know about detail, fabrications and everything. And it is really important to me.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 3

want: 3

fashion: 3

really: 2

start: 2

brand: 2

because: 2

factories: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but could benefit from more elaboration and specific details. To improve, provide more depth on the steps taken so far, anticipated challenges, and the personal significance of the goal. Adding concrete examples and expanding on your ideas will strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions that affect the flow. Using cohesive devices more effectively would improve coherence. For example, instead of saying 'but then,' try using 'however' or 'furthermore' to connect ideas more smoothly. Also, avoid starting multiple sentences with 'I'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in precision and variety. For instance, instead of saying 'doing some sort of fashion move board,' you could say 'creating a fashion mood board.' Also, the repetition of 'fat tree' (factory) impacts the lexical score. Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to fashion design and business.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I finished with my fashion design' should be 'I completed my fashion design degree.' Also, the phrase 'send a fashion sample like a garment sample' is a bit awkward; consider rephrasing it for better clarity. Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures to enhance the complexity of your sentences.

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Band 6+: Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: - What the goal is - Why you want to achieve it - What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: – What the goal is – Why you want to achieve it – What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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