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Band 6+: Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: - What the goal is - Why you want to achieve it - What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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I want to start my own business because I don't want to work under anyone's orders, and I would like to have flexible work hours. I want to spend more time with myself. Additionally, I want to improve my financial situation. I'm currently attending web development and artificial intelligence classes. Therefore, I'm trying to take the important steps to achieve my dream. It comes with difficulties since I am also studying, so it's not easy for me to balance both school and my other studies at the same time.

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I want to start my own business due to not working under anyone’s order and I would like to have flexible work hours. I want to spend more time with myself. Additionally, I want to improve my financial situation. I’m currently attending to web development, additionally artificial intelligence classes. Therefore, I’m trying to take the important steps in order to issue my dream. And it comes with difficulties since I am also studying, so it’s not easy for me to work out both school and my other studies at the same time.

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