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Band 4+: Describe a long-term goal you would like to achieve. You should say: What the goal is? How long have you had this goal ? How you would achieve it? And explain why you set this?

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The reason why is that not all companies are selling gas. We generally try to keep the case and solve business problems. What I'm trying to say is that we need to continue to monitor the branding campaign and manage the team, helping companies reach their target customers. This is a big personal goal that requires creativity and focus. A significant part of the reason goes to the process. I would like to go to Korea, where I can continuously learn and grow. To achieve this growth, I am going to work on my professional skills by studying at home and at university, improving my skill level and gaining practical experience through volunteer activities. I also plan to get involved in the largest spaghetti trend at this point.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

and now the reason why is that not all of the companies are selling gas. We generally try to keep the case and also solving business problems. So, you know, what I’m trying to say is that these don’t continue to monitor is possible for the branding campaign and managing team and also helping companies raise out to their target customer. This is a big person that’s from time to time, creativity and focus. And the big part of the reason goes to the price test. I would do Korea where I can continuously learn and grow. To achieve this growth, I am going to work on my professional skills by studying on house, house, and university. improving my skill level and gaining practicals, parallel roll in the seat and on the sole of volunteer activity. I also plan to get a Western largest spaghetti trend at this point

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 3

this: 3

reason: 2

companies: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

Task Response

The response addresses some parts of the prompt, such as what the goal is and how it might be achieved, but it lacks coherence and logical progression. The connection between the initial sentences regarding business problems and the subsequent mention of moving to Korea is unclear, which makes it difficult to follow the central theme. To improve, ensure that every sentence directly supports the main topic. When describing a goal, follow a chronological or logical structure: define the goal clearly, explain its origin, detail the specific steps for achievement, and conclude with the motivation. Additionally, avoid including unrelated or tangential information, such as the mention of a 'spaghetti trend,' as this detracts from the relevance of the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The fluency is significantly hindered by the lack of logical progression and coherence. The speaker jumps between business concepts (selling gas, branding campaigns) and personal ambitions (moving to Korea) without clear transitions. The connection between 'solving business problems' and 'moving to Korea' is not established. To improve, use signposting language such as 'Firstly,' 'Moving on to how I will achieve this,' and 'The main reason behind this ambition is...' to guide the listener through your narrative.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and, in several places, appears to be misused or nonsensical in context (e.g., 'selling gas' might be a transcription error for something else, and 'spaghetti trend' is likely a misinterpretation of a different term). There is an attempt to use professional terms like 'branding campaign' and 'target customer,' but they are not integrated into a cohesive thought. Focus on learning collocations related to ambitions, such as 'to pursue a career,' 'to reach a milestone,' or 'to broaden my horizons.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical structures are fragmented. There are issues with sentence construction, such as 'This is a big person that's from time to time creativity and focus,' which lacks a proper verb and logical meaning. While there are attempts at complex structures, they often fail to convey a clear message. Work on mastering basic sentence structures (Subject-Verb-Object) before attempting complex clauses, and ensure that your tenses are consistent when discussing future goals.

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