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Band 6+: Describe a new law you would like to introduce in your country. You should say - what the law would be - why you think this law is necessary - whether or not it would be popular and explain what the benefits of this new law would be.

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As a lawyer, I know how the legislative system works. If I had the authority, I would introduce many laws that are vital for our society. But one of them really stands out, which is a strict regulation against illegal hunting. The population of some species is in danger of extinction, and their numbers are decreasing these days. I think people would be very happy with this law. This law would potentially be very popular among the people because they are worried about this issue as well. The benefits of this law are that it prevents animals from extinction, and future generations would be familiar with those animals as well.

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As a lawyer, I know how legislative system works. And if I have the authority, I would introduce many laws which are vioal for our society. But one of them, uh, really standounds out, which is a strict regulation against illegal hunting. Uh, population of, uh, some species are in danger of extinction and their population is decreasing these days. I think, uh, people would be very happy with this, uh, law. And this law potentially is very popular among the, uh, people because they are worried about this, uh, issue as well. And the benefits of, uh, this law is, uh, it prevents, uh, uh, animals from extinction. And, uh, future generation would be familiar with those animals as well. Start.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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this: 4

extinction: 2

people: 2

animals: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The response adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanations and specific examples to support the claims. Elaborating on the specifics of the law, such as penalties for violations, and providing concrete examples of endangered species and the impact of illegal hunting would strengthen the response. Including personal experiences or observations related to the issue would also enhance the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There are a few hesitations and filler words ("uh," "um"), but they don't significantly impede understanding. Improving fluency would involve reducing these fillers and practicing smoother transitions between ideas. The structure is logical, addressing all parts of the prompt.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "vital," "regulation," and "extinction" are used appropriately. However, there's room for more precise and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of 'standounds out,' consider 'is particularly important' or 'is a priority.' Expanding vocabulary will enhance the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. For example, "vioal" should be "vital." The sentence structure is simple but effective. To achieve a higher score, focus on more complex grammatical structures and ensure consistent accuracy in verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. The phrase 'the benefits of, uh, this law is' should be 'the benefits of this law are'.

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