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Band 7+: describe a new law you would like to introducte in your country - what law it is - what changes this law brings - whether this new law will be popular - how you came up with this law - and explain how you feel about this new law

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I would like to introduce a law that will allow peaceful demonstrations and protests in my country. Right now, we have one, but due to the current situations in the country, in different regions, it is banned for various reasons like COVID, or generally it is hard to get your demonstration approved by the government of your city because of political situations in Russia. I would make the process simpler and allow citizens to protest in general because I think it is a part of a formula of a good country, of a country that will develop in the right direction, where its citizens can actually express their feelings whether they are positive or negative about current laws implemented or the general course of internal and external politics of the country. I think it will be very popular because as of now a lot of people have a lot to say and they are not allowed because of these ridiculous changes in laws. By constitution, we are allowed to express ourselves, but this right is violated by other laws implemented by the government which is unfair and unlawful. I didn't think about it for too long, about this particular law because it is something I face every day. I want to speak up, I want to change the way things are in my country, but I can't because of this. That's why I think that this law will be very popular and a lot of people will use it especially now since the situation has reached a critical point.
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I would like to introduce a law that will allow peaceful demonstrations and protests in my country. Right now, we have one, but due to the current situations in the country, in different regions, it is banned due to various reasons like COVID various reasons like COVID or generally it is hard to get your demonstration approved by the government of your city because of political situations in Russia. I would make the process simpler and allow citizens to protest in general because I think it is a part of a formula of a good country, of a country that will develop in the right traction, then its citizens can actually express their feelings whether they are positive or negative about current laws implemented or the general course of internal and external politics of the country. I think it will be very popular because as of now a lot of people have a lot to say and they are not allowed because of these ridiculous changes in laws. By constitution, we are allowed to express ourselves, but this right is violated by other laws implemented by the government which is unfair and unlawful. I didn’t think about it for too long, about this particular law because it is something I face every day. I want to speak up, I want to change the way things are in my country, but I can’t because of this. That’s why I think that this law will be very popular and a lot of people will use it especially now since the situation has reached its climax.

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Overall Band Score

7
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:
country: 6
because: 6
will: 5
think: 4
this: 4
right: 3
about: 3
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Pronunciation

7
Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

8
The answer is well-developed and directly addresses all parts of the topic. It clearly describes the law, the changes it would bring, discusses its potential popularity, and explains how the idea was conceived through personal experience. The response is detailed and stays on topic throughout. To achieve a higher score, consider providing more specific examples of how the law would be implemented or what exact changes would be made to the current process. Additionally, elaborating on the potential challenges or opposition to the law could add further depth.

Fluency & Coherence

7
The answer is generally coherent and addresses all parts of the topic. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'various reasons like COVID various reasons like COVID') and a slight lack of smooth transitions between ideas. To improve, use more cohesive devices (e.g., 'firstly', 'moreover', 'consequently') and avoid repeating phrases. The structure could be more clearly organized by dedicating a sentence to each bullet point in the topic.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary is appropriate and includes some good expressions (e.g., 'peaceful demonstrations', 'formula of a good country', 'right traction', 'reached its climax'). However, there are minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'traction' instead of 'direction') and some informal language (e.g., 'ridiculous changes'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'legitimate grievances', 'civic engagement', or 'constitutional rights', and avoid colloquial terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
The grammar is mostly accurate with a mix of simple and complex structures. There are a few errors, such as missing articles (e.g., 'by constitution' should be 'by the constitution') and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'I didn't think about it for too long, about this particular law'). To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., conditional sentences, relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and article usage are consistent.

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