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Band 6+: "Describe a perfect job you would like to have in the future You should say: What it is How you knew it What you need to learn to get this job And explain why you think it is a perfect job for you"

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Well, that's a really nice question. To be honest, I would say my perfect job is becoming a drilling engineer. It's my dream job, I would say. A drilling engineer focuses on how we can drill for oil, gas, and petrol because it's really important for the production process. To get this job, I need to complete most of my studies, including some seminars. I learn how to drill and how to understand oil and petrol movement easily. I have also been learning physics, mathematics, and chemistry to complete all tasks in less time with more productivity. That's why I really want to be a drilling engineer, a senior drilling engineer. It's important for my job and career opportunities.

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Well that’s really nice question to be honest I would say my perfect job is becoming Dirling engineer it’s my doing job I would say actually. Dirling engineer that means how can we drill oil, gas and petrol because it’s really important for the production process. For getting this job I complete most of studying some of semis. I learn how to drill, how to easily understand oils movement, petrol movement And also I have been learning physics, mathematics and CHEMS 3 for completing all tasks in less time, more productivity. Because of obtaining this job, it’s my dream job, I would say. That’s why I really want to be a drilling engineer, a special senior drilling engineer. It’s really important for my job and career opportunities.

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engineer: 4

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drill: 2

petrol: 2

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