Part 3

Band 5+: Describe a person who admire more

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I am going to describe my mother. She is 41 years old. She is an elf's wife. She has long black hair and black eyes. She is a fan of watching American movies. She enjoys the shows. She doesn't like cats, but our family has one cat. I like cats because she is very fair.

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I am going to describe about my mother. She is 41 years old. She is an elf’s wife. She is long and black hair and black eyes. She is a king on watching American movies. She enjoys watching the show. She doesn’t like cats and our family has one cat. I like cats because she is very fair.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

black: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but lacks detail and depth. Consider expanding on the reasons why you admire this person, providing specific examples and anecdotes to illustrate your points. Focus on the qualities and characteristics that make this person admirable, rather than simply listing physical attributes or preferences.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the description lacks a clear structure and some parts are disjointed. The connection between liking cats and the mother's fairness is unclear. Improving the flow and adding transitions would enhance coherence. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking to ensure a smoother delivery.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. Phrases like "elf's wife" and "king on watching American movies" are unusual and imprecise. Using more descriptive and accurate vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms and more sophisticated expressions to enrich your language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect sentence structure ("She is long and black hair") and inappropriate word usage. While the basic sentence structure is understandable, more complex grammatical structures and accurate tense usage are needed. Focus on improving subject-verb agreement and using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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