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Band 6+: Describe a person who has influenced you

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My dearest friend Aurob, I met him in our university during the first semester, and he became a very good friend of mine. He is a very kind person and is friendly with everyone. Because of his behavior and kindness to everybody, I am surprised, as I have not seen anyone with these qualities in present days. This generation is filled with ego and jealousy, but he is completely different. I have learned a lot from him; he is so beautiful in heart, and we enjoyed a lot together. He became my best friend, and up to now, we share everything, whatever happens in our lives each day. He is one of the best friends I have.

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My dearest friend Aurob, they have met in our university at first semester and he became a very good friend of mine. He was a very kind person, he is very friendly with everyone and because of his behaviour and his kindness to everybody, I am surprised because I have not seen anyone with this qualities in present days because this generation is completely with ego and jealousy people but he is completely different, I have learnt a lot from him, he is so beautiful in her and we enjoyed a lot, he became a best friend and up to now we will see everything, whatever happens in our life in day and he was one of the best friend for me.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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with: 3

have: 3

became: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is a good start, but it could be improved by adding more specific examples of how Aurob has influenced you. Instead of general statements about his kindness, describe specific situations where his actions impacted you. Elaborate on what you have learned from him and how these lessons have shaped your life. Adding more detail and specific examples will make your answer more compelling and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There are some instances of repetition and self-correction. Try to plan your answer briefly before speaking to improve the flow and reduce hesitations. Practice speaking at a natural pace.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise and varied. Phrases like "very kind person" and "friendly with everyone" are a bit simplistic. Try to use more descriptive adjectives and synonyms to show a wider range of vocabulary. For example, instead of 'very kind', you could use 'compassionate', 'benevolent', or 'altruistic'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect use of pronouns and verb tenses. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles. Review grammar rules related to tenses and pronouns to improve accuracy. For example, 'he is so beautiful in her' should be 'he is so beautiful at heart' or 'he has a beautiful heart'.

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