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Band 5+: Describe a piece of advice that had a significant impact on your life. You should say: - Who ga5ve you the advice - What the advice was about - When it was given And explain why it had such a big impact on you.

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I heard this advice on the Internet. Some person says, 'I'll do it or die.' His name is Jim Rohn. This phrase and like advice helped me in my daily routine, my future plans in my life. Jim Rohn gave me this advice in his speech on a video on YouTube. I use this phrase on my iPhone wallpaper and every day I see this phrase and hear it. After this, I create my plan for my daily routine. Every day I go to the gym, go to work, and after I study English and some subjects to improve, and every day I keep this phrase in my head: 'I'll do it or die.'

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I hear this advice on the Internet. Some person says, I’ll do it or die. His name is Jim Rohn. This phrase and like advice helped me in my daily routine, my future plans on my life. Jim Rohn gave me this advice in her speech on video on YouTube. I use this phrase on my iPhone wallpaper and every day I solve this phrase and here. After this I create my plan for my daily routine. Every day I go to the gym, go to work and after I study English and some subjects for improve and every day I stay this phrase in my head I’ll do it or die

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

this: 7

phrase: 4

advice: 3

every: 3

'i'll: 2

daily: 2

routine: 2

after: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer addresses the topic but lacks specific details and personal experience. The advice is mentioned, but the source is unclear (Jim Rohn is a speaker, but the quote is not accurately attributed). The explanation of how it affected actions is general and could be more developed with concrete examples. To improve, provide a clear context of when and where you received the advice, elaborate on the specific impact on decisions or actions, and include more personal anecdotes. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks logical progression and uses simple connectors. There is noticeable repetition and self-correction. To improve, organize ideas more clearly, use a wider range of cohesive devices, and avoid repeating phrases like 'every day'.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and repetitive. The phrase 'I'll do it or die' is overused. There are errors like 'like advice' and 'solve this phrase'. To improve, learn synonyms for 'advice' and 'impact', and use more precise expressions. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is inconsistent with errors in tense ('I hear'), pronoun agreement ('her speech' for Jim Rohn), and word form ('for improve'). Sentence structures are simple. To improve, practice using past tenses correctly and expand sentence variety.

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Band 5+: Describe a piece of advice that had a significant impact on your life. You should say: - Who ga5ve you the advice - What the advice was about - When it was given And explain why it had such a big impact on you.

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