After the institute, me and my classmates want to play computer games and we attended two game clubs and we start to play game which is keyest and in the middle of fun suddenly two of the game club was open at the end There was my dad and she punished me while I was spending your time in this unnecessary things. And after this she said to me, please recall yourself and pay your attention on your studies, games and fun or joy don’t give you future aim it’s not as to your aims because this is so spend your time just you should only focus your career not such a kind of fucking games. When I received the advice it was the middle of the night and we just want to have fun with my classmates. It was approximately two years ago and it will be great punishment and advice for me. For me it’s unforgettable and memorable so I do things and I remember when I’m doing something.
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After the institute, my classmates and I wanted to play computer games, so we attended two game clubs. We started to play a game which was the key to our fun, but suddenly, at the end, my dad showed up and punished me for spending my time on these unnecessary things. After this, he said to me, please remind yourself to pay attention to your studies. Games and fun don't provide you with future goals; they are not aligned with your aims because they waste your time. You should only focus on your career, not on such games. I received this advice in the middle of the night when we just wanted to have fun with my classmates. It was approximately two years ago, and it was a significant punishment and piece of advice for me. For me, it's unforgettable and memorable, so I reflect on it when I'm doing something.
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