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Band 4+: Describe a public facility that been renovated and improved recently

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It is irrefutable that public services play an important role not only for the people but also for the developing economy of every nation. There are a myriad number of public services in my city, and I would like to shed some light on a public facility, the library, which has been recently renovated by the local authority members. It underwent renovation in 2019 and was completed in 2023. There was such a wide gap in the library's condition that I was unable to go there. However, I was overjoyed when the local authorities decided to renovate the library in 2019, as there was a lack of various amenities. The first and foremost problem was...

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It is ir refutable that public services play an important role only for the person but also important for the developing economy of every nation. There are myate number of the public services in my city now I would like to shed some light on the public facility that is library which has been recently innovated by the local author members. It and under it underwent renovation in 2019 and was completed in 2023. It was so much wide gap that I was not able to go to library so but I was over the moon when the local thirties decided to reate ThEc library in 2019 as there were lack of the various amenities in the library. The first of and the main main uh problem was mhm.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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public: 3

services: 2

library: 2

local: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The student has identified a relevant public facility and mentioned some improvements, but the answer lacks detail and specific examples. The student could have provided more information about the renovation process, the new amenities, and the impact of the renovation on the community. For example, they could have mentioned specific changes made to the library, such as the addition of new books, computers, or study spaces. They could also have described how the renovation has made the library more accessible or welcoming to the public. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

3.5

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and disjointed, with several instances of repetition and self-correction. The answer lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The student could improve their fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and using connecting words and phrases to link their ideas together.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The student uses some appropriate vocabulary, but there are also some errors and inconsistencies. For example, the student uses the phrase "myate number" instead of "myriad number." The student could improve their lexical resource by expanding their vocabulary and using more precise and varied language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The student makes several grammatical errors, including incorrect use of articles, prepositions, and verb tenses. The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing using different grammatical structures.

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