Part 2

Band 5+: Describe a rule that you think is unfair. You should say: - What the rule is - Who it affects - Why you think it is unfair And suggest how it could be changed to be more fair.

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Polished transcript:

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So when it comes to the rules, I think the most unfavorable rule is that children at school should wear uniforms because I think that children compete with each other. They compete, and it isn't very helpful for their mental health because some of them are discriminated against and they can't handle this. I think that removing uniforms could solve this problem, and the children would not be discriminated against by others. I think it's very important to consider this.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

So when it comes to the rules, I think the most unfavorable rule is that children at school should wear uniforms because I think that children compete with each other. so and they just they doesn’t and they compete and it isn’t very helpful for their health mental health because some of them are at discriminate and they can’t handle this. So I think that’s where uniform could solve this problem and the Tijian would be really… wouldn’t be discriminated by others. And I think it’s very…

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

think: 4

that: 3

children: 3

this: 3

uniforms: 2

because: 2

compete: 2

discriminated: 2

against: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but could benefit from more specific details and elaboration. Providing concrete examples and a clearer explanation of the rule's impact would strengthen the answer. Additionally, expanding on the suggested change and its potential benefits would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and some repetition ('they compete'). The structure is generally present, but the flow could be improved with better linking words and a clearer progression of ideas. Try to avoid starting sentences with 'So' repeatedly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The word 'unfavorable' is a good start, but the rest of the vocabulary is quite basic. Try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of rules, fairness, and school environments. For example, instead of just saying 'discriminated,' you could use phrases like 'subjected to social stratification' or 'experience socioeconomic disparities.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors present, such as subject-verb agreement issues ('they doesn't'). The range of sentence structures is limited. Focus on using a wider variety of sentence structures (complex sentences, conditional clauses) and ensuring accurate grammar. For example, instead of 'uniform could solve this problem,' try 'removing the uniform requirement could potentially alleviate this issue.'

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