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Band 6+: Describe a short-term job you would like to do in a foreign country

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In a foreign country, every person has to work to pay their expenses. So today, I would like to talk about a short-term job that I would love to do in a foreign country. It's none other than cooking, and since my childhood, I have been cooking very well. Moreover, my mother helped me learn how to cook in a very good and presentable way. Furthermore, it will help me pay my university expenses as I want to move abroad to Australia. The universities are very expensive, so it will help me pay my university fees. Moreover, I love to do a part-time job as a chef. Furthermore, it will help me out because I will live alone in Australia, so I will be able to cook my own meals three times a day, and I can make them in a very presentable way. So this is the job that I would love to do in a foreign country.

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In foreign country every person have to do work to pay their expenses. So today I would like to talk about a short term work, short term job that I would love to do in a foreign country. It’s none other than cooking and since my childhood I am doing cooking very well. Moreover my mother helped me out how to cook in a very good and presentable way. Furthermore it will help me to pay out my expenses of the university as I want to move abroad in Australia. the universities are very expensive so it will be help to pay my help to pay my university fees. Moreover I love to do part-time job as a chef. Furthermore it will be help help me out because I am I will live alone in Australia so I am able to cook my own meal for the three times and I can make in a very presentable way. So this is the job that I would love to do in the foreign country.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

will: 5

very: 4

foreign: 3

country: 3

would: 3

love: 3

help: 3

expenses: 2

cooking: 2

moreover: 2

presentable: 2

furthermore: 2

university: 2

australia: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic by describing a short-term job the speaker would like to do in a foreign country. However, the answer could be improved by providing more specific details about the job itself, such as the type of cuisine, the specific location in Australia, or the type of establishment. Expanding on these aspects would make the response more detailed and engaging.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there is noticeable repetition of phrases like 'furthermore' and 'it will help me'. The structure is basic and could benefit from more varied connectors and a clearer progression of ideas. Try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your speech. Practice speaking more smoothly without relying on the same connectors repeatedly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it lacks precision and variety. The candidate uses simple words and phrases. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to cooking and working abroad. For example, instead of saying 'cook in a very good and presentable way,' you could say 'prepare gourmet meals with an artistic presentation.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are several errors in sentence structure and verb tense. For example, 'I am doing cooking very well' should be 'I have been cooking very well.' There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. Focus on practicing a wider range of grammatical structures and paying attention to accuracy in verb tenses and sentence construction. Review basic grammar rules and practice applying them in your speech.

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