Part 2

Band 5+: Describe a technological device you would like to buy in the future. You should say: - What kind of device it is - What its main features are - How much it costs And explain why you want to buy this device.

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

55% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

A technological device that I would like to own in the future is a laptop. The laptop has a lot of features, such as a webcam, microphone, and an eye-tracking system. I want it because it helps me a lot with my work and studies, and I can use it to help me exercise and with my homework. Additionally, it's very important that it's lightweight and portable. The laptop helps me learn better, and I can chat and call with my friends. In short, this device would greatly improve my work and studying compared to what I currently have.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

A technology device which I would like to out in the future, I think this is a laptop. The laptop which has a lot of features, so that the webcam, microphone, the open eye system I think I want it because it helps me to much at my work and study and I can use the to help me to exercise and my homework, as my study. In the third day, it’s very important, it’s very light and warm, the weight. The student help me to learn your wish and I can chat and chatting calling with my friends. In short, this is the goal of my work and studying better than I am.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 40 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

laptop: 3

with: 3

device: 2

would: 2

helps: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but could benefit from more specific details and elaboration. Providing more concrete examples of how the laptop's features would improve your work, studies, and personal life would strengthen the answer. Additionally, expanding on the unique aspects or functionalities you desire in a future laptop could enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations. The structure is present, but the flow could be improved. Try to use more linking words and phrases to connect your ideas smoothly. Practice speaking more continuously without frequent pauses.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. There are some inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., "out" instead of "own"). Expand your vocabulary related to technology and practice using more precise terms. Focus on using synonyms and varied expressions to describe features and benefits.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains several errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense, and article usage. For example, "The student help me to learn your wish" is grammatically incorrect. Focus on practicing basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Review verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe a technological device you would like to buy in the future. You should say: – What kind of device it is – What its main features are – How much it costs And explain why you want to buy this device.

Well, to be honest, I am a bookworm, so my desirable technological device is definitely Kindle. So, it’s eBook, which was created by Amazon Company, and it is quite a convenient tool for bookworms like me. You can install any book, any app to read, to consume some information for my study or just for […]

Band 7+

See All

Describe your motherland You should say: what your country is where it is located what kind of people live there and explain what you like most about your country

So my motherland is Ukraine, is located in the Eastern Europe, it is bordering with 7 countries, Russia, Belarus, Poland, Romania, Moldova, Hungary and Slovakia. Ukraine is one of the biggest countries in Europe and in our country people they’re so kind I would if comparing in the Europe I don’t know in our country […]

Band 6+

Describe a memorable landmark you have visited?

A memorable landmark that I have visited is the Eiffel Tower located in the center of Paris, France. It is a massive iron structure about 330 meters tall with a wide base and a pointy peak in front of it. There is a large greasy field and behind it is a wide river. It was […]

Band 7+

describe a celebriy you like

I would like to talk about a celebrity I truly admire, Jane Ortega, who is a global novel actress and filmmaker. She is a major star and one of the most popular young actresses nowadays. Her most famous role is in their series Wednesday, where she began well known for playing a cold and restless […]

Band 7+

Something did your family members feel proud

Today I am talking about my mother’s very kind hearted patients and hard worker persons. They often help us other. So I feel proud as I am her daughter. I would like to share the story about the day when he did a work, when I feel proud. I remembered once a time just one […]

Band 6+

Describe an outdoor sport you would like to do You should say: What it is When/where you would like to do it With whom you would like to do it And explain why you would like to do it

While sports are a great way to stay fit and maintain one’s health, I also have a passion for many sports that I truly enjoy. One such support that I aspire to pursue as a career in the future is basketball. I have been playing this game since my childhood. In my school years, I […]

Band 7+

Describe a movie you watched recently that made you feel disappointed

Well, I am not that person who spent the time on watching a movie. But if the Tracer is fascinating me, then I prefer to watch a movie with my friends or my family member, either home or theatre. Here I would like to talk about one such movie which I just recently watched with […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium