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Band 6+: Describe a time when you felt proud of a family member You should say: who the person is when it happened what the person did and explain why you felt proud of the person.

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Actually, there are many times that I am proud of my family members. However, there is one occasion that I am particularly proud of my little brother. Last week, when he completed all his final exams in high school, he was always bright and tried his best. However, this time he surprised himself. When I went to the ceremony, I couldn't believe my ears. He got an incredible score of 100% in all his subjects. I was really proud of him, not only for his incredible score but also for the valuable life skills that he learned, such as dedication. I was really impressed by his dedication during this period.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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proud: 3

there: 2

however: 2

incredible: 2

score: 2

really: 2

dedication: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response adequately addresses all parts of the question, providing a clear description of the situation and explaining the reasons for the speaker's pride. However, more specific details and elaboration on the brother's dedication and the life skills learned would strengthen the response and enhance the overall impact. Consider adding more descriptive language to paint a richer picture of the event and the speaker's emotions. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly easy to follow. However, there are some instances of repetition and hesitation, indicated by fillers like "um." Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions between ideas and reducing the use of fillers. Practice speaking at a consistent pace and try to plan your response beforehand to avoid unnecessary pauses.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "incredible score" and "valuable life skills" are well-chosen. However, there's room for improvement in precision. For example, instead of "I was really emressssed of dedication," a more precise phrase would be "I was really impressed by his dedication." Expanding vocabulary with synonyms and more sophisticated expressions will enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are some errors. For example, "there is'to occur" is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is sometimes simple. Improving grammatical range involves using more complex sentence structures, such as subordinate clauses, and ensuring consistent subject-verb agreement. Careful proofreading before speaking would help to eliminate errors.

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