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Band 6+: Describe a time when you felt proud of a family member You should say: who the person is when it happened what the person did and explain why you felt proud of the person.

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Actually, there are many times that I have been proud of my family members. However, there was a recent occasion when I felt proud of my little brother when he completed his final exams in high school last week. He is always bright, but this time he surprised himself and did his best. When I went to the ceremony, I heard the score for my little brother, which was 100% in all his subjects. I couldn't believe my ears. I was really proud of my little brother not only for his incredible score but also for the values he learned, such as dedication and patience. I'm really proud of his incredible score since he worked hard to achieve it.

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Actually there are many times that I proud of my family members. However, there recent occur that I broud my little brother when he complete his final exams in his high school last week. He is always bright. However, this time he surprised himself and he did all his best. He and when I went to the ceremony I heard the SC for my little brother which was 100% in his all subjects. I wasn’t believe my ears. I was really proud of my little brother not only for his incredible score however, but also for that value. Value like skills that he learned. Such as? Such as dedication and the patient. I’m really abreast of his incredible score since he did his best to give this score.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

proud: 4

when: 3

little: 3

brother: 3

score: 3

there: 2

really: 2

incredible: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The response adequately addresses all parts of the question, providing a clear description of the situation and explaining the reasons for the speaker's pride. To improve, consider expanding on the challenges faced and the efforts made by the brother to achieve such a high score. Adding more specific details about the dedication and patience demonstrated would further strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly easy to follow. However, there are a few instances of hesitant speech and minor disruptions in fluency ("Actually there are many times that I proud", "He and when I went"). Smoother transitions between ideas would improve the score. Practice speaking more naturally and confidently.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "bright" and "incredible score" are used repeatedly. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Consider synonyms for 'bright' and 'incredible' and explore more descriptive language to paint a richer picture.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ("I broud", "wasn't believe"), incorrect word order ("He and when I went"), and a missing preposition ("proud of...for that value"). While the overall message is understandable, improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and prepositional phrases.

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