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Band 4+: Describe a time when you visited a friend or family member at their workplace. You should say: - Who you visited - Where this person worked - Why you visited this person's workplace And explain how you felt about visitind this person's workplace.

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I recently visited my brother at his workplace. He works the night shift at a supermarket in Kathmandu, the capital of Nepal. I went to see him because I haven't had much time to meet up with him personally lately, as I've been busy with my own work. It was great to see him and catch up. We had a cup of tea together and enjoyed each other's company. It was really nice to visit him at his workplace and see where he spends his time.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Yesterday I visit friend at their old place beside that, I visit family member at the old place. M I visit my brother on his work place. He work on b watch any supermarket, his lights in Kashmandu and center part of the Nepal I visit, uh, my brother in its old place because I have no time to meet meet in personal uh, I’m busy in my own duty, man. I feel very happy to meet my brother and we have some cup of tea and we enjoy lot ofi.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

workplace: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The student provided a good response to the topic, but it lacked some details. They could have elaborated more on why they visited their brother and what they did together. For example, they could have mentioned what kind of supermarket their brother works at or what they talked about during their visit. The student also mentioned visiting a friend at their old place, which is not relevant to the topic. Overall, the student answered the topic adequately, but could have provided more details and stayed focused on the prompt. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech was somewhat hesitant and contained some repetition. They also used fillers like "uh" and "man." The student could improve their fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and avoiding these fillers. The student's response was generally coherent, but could have been more organized. For example, they could have used transition words to connect their ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The student used a limited range of vocabulary. They could have used more specific and descriptive words to describe their brother's workplace and their experience. For example, instead of saying "supermarket," they could have said "grocery store" or "convenience store." They could also have used more vivid verbs to describe their actions, such as "chatted" instead of "enjoyed lot ofi."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student made some grammatical errors, such as using the past tense incorrectly in "I visit my brother on his work place." They also used some incorrect articles, such as "his lights" instead of "the lights." The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing using them in their speech.

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