Band 5+: Describe a time when you were surprised by something someone did for you. You should say: - Who did it - What they did - When and where it happened And explain why you were surprised.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the topic and provides some relevant information. To improve, elaborate more on the 'when' and 'why' aspects of the surprise. Adding more specific details and personal experiences would also strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('so'). The structure is present, but the flow could be improved by reducing filler words and linking ideas more smoothly. Try to minimize the use of 'so' as a connector and focus on using a wider range of cohesive devices.

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but it lacks precision and variety. The language used is quite basic. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words related to the surprise and the party. For example, instead of just saying 'bought everything she needed,' you could describe specific items or the effort she put into finding them.

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are a few minor errors (e.g., 'I don't use to celebrate'). The range of structures is somewhat limited. To enhance your score, aim to use a wider variety of sentence structures and verb tenses accurately. For instance, you could use more complex sentences to describe your feelings and reactions.