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Band 5+: Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: - What you persuaded them to do - Why they were unwilling at first - How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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Actually, this person was my dad. I think I approached him because the business in my country involves many people, including various companies and different age groups in the company environment. It was that I pushed my business because I helped my father in the business. After that, I became successful. I developed a strong relationship with my father. The first business was important for me and for my father, and it was a big step for both of us. I felt proud after successfully persuading him to support my business endeavors.

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Actually, this person, he was my dad. I think I broach it, okay, because the business in my country, the business from the people, all the people in my country, such as company or different age in the company or environment or a rivment or anything in my city. Also, okay, it was that I bushed my business, okay, because I helped your father in the business. After that, I became successful. After that, I developed a me and a father very well. Because first business, okay, and big business, okay, and important business, okay, for me and for my father, okay.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 5

father: 3

because: 2

after: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response touches on the topic but lacks specific details and a clear narrative. To improve, provide a more detailed account of the situation, including the specific reluctance your father had, the exact steps you took to persuade him, and a more descriptive explanation of your feelings afterward. Adding more context and specific examples will make the response more engaging and comprehensive. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response lacks clear organization and coherence. There are many pauses and fillers ('okay') which disrupt the flow. The ideas are not clearly linked, making it difficult to follow the narrative. To improve, focus on structuring your answer with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices to connect your ideas and practice speaking more fluently without relying on filler words.

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The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. The speaker struggles to express ideas precisely, using vague terms and repeating words like 'business' and 'okay'. To improve, expand your vocabulary and practice using synonyms and more descriptive language. Focus on using specific words to convey your meaning accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains errors that sometimes impede understanding. There are issues with sentence structure and verb tense usage. To improve, focus on practicing basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Review and correct your errors regularly.

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Band 5+: Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: - What you persuaded them to do - Why they were unwilling at first - How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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