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Band 4+: Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: - What you persuaded them to do - Why they were unwilling at first - How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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When I was at home with my child, I had an argument with my aunt and my sisters. I was the only adult in the house, and all the neighbors knew about the situation. We had to complete an essential task. My aunt gave me advice, but I believed it was wrong, which made me angry. Despite this, I managed to handle the situation and successfully argued my point with my aunt and the others involved. I think I have good communication skills, which helped me resolve the issue effectively.

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When I was in home and I was with your child I argue with my auntie and the sisters and I like on big women like all neighbors know and only with same area and we have to do something like essential task. So my auntie gave me advice but this advice is wrong so I was angry with my auntie and It will last my auntie against me but I handled the situation and I successfully arguments with auntie and the citizens handling it. I think I have a good communication with the public, so I handled the situation.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

with: 3

aunt: 3

situation: 2

which: 2

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Task Response

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Lexical Resource

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Band 4+: Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: - What you persuaded them to do - Why they were unwilling at first - How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

Describe a time you successfully persuaded someone to do something they were initially unwilling to do. You should say: – What you persuaded them to do – Why they were unwilling at first – How you managed to convince them And explain how you felt after the persuasion.

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