Band 6+: Describe a TV series that you like

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question, but lacks detail and depth. Consider expanding on the plot, characters, and what specifically makes the series enjoyable to you. More descriptive language would improve the response.

The answer is somewhat disjointed. The initial sentence is confusing ('Also, I don't watch TV, but there are times when I do town'). The description of the show is understandable but lacks a clear narrative structure. Improving the flow and organization would significantly enhance the score. Consider using clearer transitions between ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'passionate' and 'complex' are used effectively, but more precise and nuanced vocabulary could elevate the response. The use of 'heme' seems to be a mistake and should be corrected. Expanding the vocabulary related to character development and plot would be beneficial.

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. The phrase 'she allowed him the depth of her feelings was complex' is grammatically incorrect. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.