Band 4+: Describe a website that you bought something from you should say what the website is what you bought from this website how satisfied zuya with what you bought and explain what you like or dislike and about using this website.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the topic of using a website to buy something, but it fails to address several key components of the prompt. Specifically, the speaker does not mention what specific product was purchased, how satisfied they were with that purchase, or the specific likes and dislikes regarding the user experience of the website. To improve, ensure that every part of the multi-part question is answered. Instead of providing general information about the website's availability, focus on describing the personal experience of the transaction and the quality of the item received.

The speaker struggles to maintain a flow of speech. There is significant repetition of words and phrases (e.g., 'this website this website'), and the ideas are fragmented. To improve, work on using cohesive devices (like 'furthermore', 'moreover', or 'because') to link your sentences together rather than stating isolated facts. You also failed to address all parts of the prompt, such as how satisfied you were or what you liked/disliked about the user experience.

The vocabulary is very limited and repetitive. You rely heavily on the word 'website' and 'product' without using synonyms or descriptive adjectives. To reach a higher band, try to use more specific vocabulary related to e-commerce, such as 'online marketplace,' 'user-friendly interface,' 'wide array of goods,' or 'customer reviews.' Instead of saying 'available more products,' you could say 'it offers an extensive selection of items.'

There are frequent grammatical errors that impede communication. For example, 'I bought a product in a website' should be 'on a website,' and 'people saw most using' is grammatically incorrect. There is a lack of complex sentence structures; most attempts at sentences are broken or incomplete. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures (Subject + Verb + Object) and practicing the use of relative clauses (e.g., 'which is a website that...') to build more sophisticated sentences.