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Band 5+: Describe an advertisement that made a strong impression on you. You should say: - What product or service it was advertising - Where and when you saw it - What the advertisement showed or said And explain why it made such a strong impression on you.

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I watched a lot of types of advertisements, and I have advertisements that significantly influenced me. This advertisement was about books and a dream. I saw it on TV when I was a child, and I remember it well. It influenced me, and I found it very interesting. There were products like books by Agatha Christie and Alice. The advertisement helped me improve myself. I can't say it today, but the advertisement influenced me because it made me think that I needed to improve myself. Just by seeing this advertisement, I felt the need to enhance myself and influence my own growth.

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I watched a lot of types of advertisements and I have advertisements that significantly influenced me. Its its advertisement was about books and about a dream. I saw it on the TV When I was a child, I heard it and I think so. It influenced me and this is very interesting. There were products like books by Agatha Christie or by Alice. And the advertising improved myself also. Advertisement, well, I can’t say it today. Advertisement influenced me because I had thinking like I need to improve myself for just for if I see this Advertisement I need to improve myself and influence myself myself

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

advertisement: 4

influenced: 3

myself: 3

advertisements: 2

books: 2

improve: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but lacks specific details and development. To improve, provide more concrete information about the advertisement, the products featured, and the specific elements that made it influential. Elaborate on how the advertisement made you feel and the actions you took as a result. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is hesitant and lacks clear organization. There are noticeable pauses and repetitions ('its its,' 'myself myself'). The ideas are not connected smoothly, making it difficult to follow the narrative. To improve, practice structuring your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'however') to link your ideas and maintain a consistent flow.

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The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. There's repetition of words like 'advertisement' and 'influenced.' To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and more descriptive language. For example, instead of just saying 'books,' you could describe the genre or the impact the books had. Expand your vocabulary related to advertising and personal development.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains errors that sometimes impede understanding. Examples include incorrect sentence structure and awkward phrasing ('I had thinking like I need to improve myself'). Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately. Practice constructing complex sentences and pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Review basic grammar rules and practice applying them in your speaking.

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Band 5+: Describe an advertisement that made a strong impression on you. You should say: - What product or service it was advertising - Where and when you saw it - What the advertisement showed or said And explain why it made such a strong impression on you.

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