Part 2

Band 6+: Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

64% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

Okay, I saw the ad on Snapchat. The product was a famous perfume, the best one. The ad said this is the scent of the end of the year. The discount was very high, at 1,800 percent. It also mentioned, buy one and take one as a gift. I'm really interested in this ad because this perfume is very popular and it's always sold out. I can't find it easily. So, I thought, when I buy one and take one as a gift, I will bring it for my mom or sister. This is useful for us, not just for me. I'm going to go to the shop and take advantage of this sale and share it with my family.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Okay, I saw the ad on Snapchat. The product was a famous perfume and the best one. The ad said this is the scound of the end year. So this count was very high. It was 1,800 percent. This count went. And he said, my one and one take one gift as a gift. I’m really interested in this ad because this perfume is very, very, very, very, very and it’s always sold out. I can’t find it easily. So, I think, okay, when I buy one and take one as a gift, I will bring it for my mom or sister. So this is useful for us, not just for me. I’m going to go to the shop and take this sale and sharing it with my family.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 48 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Vocabulary Repetition:

this: 5

take: 3

perfume: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the prompt, but could benefit from more detail and elaboration. To improve, provide more specific information about the advertisement's visual or auditory elements and expand on the reasons for your purchase decision. Adding sensory details and emotional connections would make the response more engaging and comprehensive.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations ('very, very, very, very, very'). The organization of ideas is generally understandable, but could be improved with more cohesive devices to link sentences and ideas together more smoothly. Try to minimize repetition and aim for a more natural flow of speech.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. There are some inaccuracies in word choice ('scound' instead of 'scent'). To improve, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to advertising, products, and personal opinions. Use a wider range of adjectives and adverbs to describe the advertisement and your feelings about it. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are several errors in sentence structure and verb tense ('This count went,' 'my one and one take one gift'). Accuracy needs improvement. Practice using a variety of sentence structures and pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Review basic grammar rules and try to incorporate more complex sentences into your speech.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

Describe a trip you took by bike. You should say: When and where the trip was Who you went with Why you went by bike And explain how you felt about it.

Today I am going to talk about my trip to Dhanuta metropolitan city located in the heart of eastern Nepal. It is located at nearly 200 km north of my hometown. It is located in a hilly region of Nepal. also the travel to the Dhan Gupta was kind of challenging for me. I had […]

Band 6+

describe a person who always gives you advice you should say: who this person the relationship of that person to you what advice you receive from him

Alright, the person who came to my mind is my cousin sister. She is beside my mother, my mother sister, and also she is my own daughter. So, one year ago she was good at solving problems. We were hang out every day and we were walking also eating ice cream in the park. And […]

Band 6+

Describe a time when you had to overcome a significant setback. You should say: - What the setback was - What you did to overcome it - Who helped you And explain what you learned from the experience.

From my experience, the seatback was overthinking and insecure. First of all, I spent my day just like a normal activity. It was nothing happened with me, everything was fine. But suddenly, in the middle of the day, I felt uncomfortable, anxiety, confusing, and I didn’t know what happened with me. I realized that I […]

Band 6+

describe a time you have to change your plan when it was why you had to change your plan what you did and say you field about the change

Well, today I would like to talk about a time when I changed my plan regarding the type of accommodation I wanted to live in. It was a year ago when I had saved enough money and started to think of buying an apartment which was what I had always been dreaming of. However, after […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 6+: Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Describe an advertisement that persuaded you to buy a product. You should say: What advertisement it was Was it shown on TV, radio or newspaper What was good about that advertisement Explain why you think that advertisement made the product seem attractive.

Other Topics:

Describe a trip you took by bike. You should say: When and where the trip was Who you went with Why you went by bike And explain how you felt about it.

describe a person who always gives you advice you should say: who this person the relationship of that person to you what advice you receive from him

Describe an old person you know who has had an interesting life You should say: - Who is this person? - Where he/she lives - What he/she has done in his/her life - And explain how you feel about him/her

Describe a time when you had to overcome a significant setback. You should say: - What the setback was - What you did to overcome it - Who helped you And explain what you learned from the experience.

describe a time you have to change your plan when it was why you had to change your plan what you did and say you field about the change

Describe an old person you know who has had an interesting life You should say: - Who is this person? - Where he/she lives - What he/she has done in his/her life - And explain how you feel about him/her

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium