Band 6: Describe an advertisement which you found very persuasive (User-Submitted IELTS Speaking Answer)

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Let me share with you an advertisement that I found very persuasive. This is about Jinshu Chili Sauce. I have seen the Jinshu Chili Sauce commercial many times on TV and YouTube while eating. The videos talk about the magic that Jinshu creates in many different situations, like when eating instant noodles, seafood, and grilled food. It finally comes up with the slogan, 'Jinshu: Thousands of Deliciousness.' Although the video only lasts 30 seconds, with a colorful design combined with a leaflet, the advertisement has attracted and convinced customers. I am one of them. After I watched this video, I felt excited and wanted to buy this product to try. After that, I bought this product and tried it. I was very happy because it was quite delicious. This chili sauce made my meat taste even better. That's all.

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Let me share with you an advertisement which I found very prestigious. This is about Jinshu Chili Sauce. I have seen Jinshu Chili Sauce commercial many times on TV and YouTube while eating. The videos talk about the magic that Jinshu created in many different situations like when eating instant noodles, seafood and grilled food. And finally comes up with the slogan Jinshu Thousand of Deliciousness. Although the video only lasts 30 seconds with colorful design combined with leaflet, the advertisement has rejected and convinced customers. And I am one of them. After I watched this video, I feel this is quite exciting and I want to buy this product to try. And after that, I bought this product and eating. And I was very happy because this is quite delicious. This makes this chili sauce make my meat become more tasty. That’s all.

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