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Band 5+: describe an ambition that you haven't achieved

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Everyone has different ambitions, and I would like to talk about my ambition that I haven't achieved. This dream is to buy a car, and I will try my best to make this happen. I am trying to figure out how to get out of the country and earn a lot of money. I am working on it, but inshallah, when I go abroad and earn a lot of money, I will buy a car. I am working hard to fulfill my dream.

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Everyone has different ambitions and I would like to talk about my ambition that I have don’t achieve. This dream is a car but I will try to my best how this buy a car and so I am trying to forget out figure out how to get out of the country and earn a lot of money and I am working on the on it but inshallah when I am going to abroad and earn a lot of money then I buying a car so I full hard working to fulfill my dream.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

dream: 2

money: 2

working: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is understandable but lacks detail and development. Consider expanding on the reasons behind this ambition, the steps you are taking to achieve it, and any challenges you have encountered. Including specific examples and more descriptive language will strengthen your response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are several instances of repetition and self-correction, such as "I am trying to my best how this buy a car." The structure is a bit rambling. Focus on creating a more linear and logical flow of ideas. Practice speaking more smoothly and confidently, reducing hesitations and filler words.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. Phrases like "get out of the country" are a bit vague. Try to use more specific and sophisticated vocabulary to describe your ambition and plans. For example, instead of 'get out of the country', you could say 'work overseas' or 'emigrate'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors, such as "I have don't achieve," "how this buy a car," and "then I buying a car." While the meaning is generally clear, these errors detract from the overall accuracy. Focus on improving sentence structure and verb tenses. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more precisely.

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