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Band 5+: Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

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I feel like I was just about to play my match when my friend Mary sent me a message to support me in the game. The message was, 'Hey Kaden, I will support you.' I felt that was great, and it gave me the power to perform well in the championship match. Also, because she is a very close friend, gaining her support is important to me. Furthermore, this message motivates me because I perform well in the match and help our team win the championship. Therefore, I think it's such a necessary message for me to succeed.

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I feel say I go just before my match of like a possible and my friend Mary sent a message to me to support me in the game and the message was hey Kaden I will support you and I feel like that is very great and I have the power to come before the championship at the match and also because he’s a very close friend to me so I think gaining his support is very important to me and furthermore this message is also working for me because I do really work well in the match and help our team to get the championship therefore I think it’s a such a necessary message for me to win

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

message: 4

match: 3

support: 3

friend: 2

perform: 2

championship: 2

because: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

5.5

The response adequately addresses all parts of the question. However, more detailed description of the context surrounding the game and the friendship would strengthen the response and enhance the level of detail. Consider expanding on the impact of the message and providing more specific examples to illustrate its importance. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some fluency issues. The phrasing is sometimes awkward, and there's a little repetition. Working on smoother transitions between ideas would improve fluency. For example, instead of 'I feel say I go just before my match,' try 'Just before my match, my friend Mary sent me a message...'

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Words like 'great' and 'important' are used repeatedly. Try to use more specific and descriptive vocabulary to enhance the answer. For example, instead of 'very great,' consider 'incredibly encouraging' or 'a tremendous boost.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and tense consistency. For example, 'I feel say I go' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring consistent verb tenses. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to demonstrate grammatical control.

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