Part 2

Band 4+: Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

60% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

One of the most important text messages I received was from my friend, telling me that today is my birthday. This message is really important to me because she is currently working on a documentary, and I cannot see her right now. This message means a lot to me, and she also gave me some money to buy some presents.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

One of the most important test measures I received was to send a message to say to my friend, me, that today is my birthday. This message is really important to me because she is now working in for the documentary and I cannot see her now so this message is very important to me and he also gave me some money to buy some presents.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 24 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

important: 2

message: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response is quite brief and lacks detail. Consider expanding on the reasons why the message was important, providing more specific examples and elaborating on your feelings. Adding more descriptive language will enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is understandable, but there are some minor issues with fluency. The phrasing 'One of the most important test measures I received was to send a message...' is awkward and grammatically incorrect. The speaker also repeats 'this message is very important to me' which impacts fluency. Improving sentence structure and reducing repetition would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'test measures' are incorrect and show a lack of precision. Using more precise language, such as 'text message' and 'documentary' (as in the refined answer), would improve the lexical resource score. The phrase 'gave me some money to buy some presents' could be more nuanced.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors. 'Test measures' is incorrect, and the sentence structure is often clumsy. The use of 'he' instead of 'she' shows a lack of attention to detail. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure is crucial for a higher score. The speaker needs to practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Well, every day we have got different type of message whether that’s so important or not so important. Some of those message make us feel happy and others make us feel saddened. Well, today I would like to talk about an important message I recently received. The message was a text message from my immigration […]

Band 7+

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Well, I have experienced such situations several times throughout my life. However, one of the most meaningful ones was approximately six months ago. In fact, at that time, after graduating from the university, it was my priority to apply for a highly paid job, which was closely related to diplomacy. Therefore, I applied to several […]

Band 7+

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

About five years ago I received the most important text message in my life. It was from a friend of mine and the content was related to a test I had taken to enter the faculty of architecture. So before receiving that text I had taken an admission test which all students should take in […]

Band 7+

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

The most important text message I received is that a text received from my coach. The content is about he tell me that I have to go to the badminton competition. The competition had postponed for a few months and I didn’t care about the time of it. Luckily, my coach told me that the […]

Band 5+

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

The important message that I received was coming from my father. He sends me the message about my mother give the brief to my father safely. He sends me this message because at the Australian War, however, I have a lesson to learn music. So this message let me know that my mother is safe […]

Band 5+

See All

Describe a technological device or invention that has significantly improved people's lives. You should say: - What the device/invention is - How it works - Who it benefits And explain why you think it is so important.

One invitation that I believe has dramatically improved people’s lives is the smartphone, telephone, yes and we know it has become an essential part of our daily routine and they completely changed the way we communicate the access information in different way and a further way. In the past, people had to rely on computers […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 4+: Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Describe an important text message you received. you should say: who sent the message what was in the message why the person sent the message and explain why the message was important to you

Other Topics:

Describe a time you disagreed with a friend. You should say: - What you disagreed about - Why you disagreed - What happened as a result And explain how the disagreement affected your friendship.

Describe a book you read that inspired you to make a positive change in your life. You should say: - What the book was about - What specific aspects inspired you - How the book made you feel while reading it And explain what positive change you made as a result.

Describe a time you had to make a difficult choice between two good options. You should say: - What the two options were - What made each option attractive - What factors influenced your decision And explain how you felt about the choice you made afterwards.

Describe a place you visited that was very different from where you live. You should say: - Where the place was - When you visited it - What the differences were And explain why you found it so different.

Describe a technological device or invention that has significantly improved people's lives. You should say: - What the device/invention is - How it works - Who it benefits And explain why you think it is so important.

Describe a project or task that initially seemed impossible but you eventually completed successfully. You should say: - What the project/task was - What made it seem impossible at first - What steps you took to complete it And explain how you felt after successfully completing it.

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium