Band 5+: describe an important text message you received recently.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

This is a good start to answering the question. However, to improve, you could add more details about the text message itself, such as the exact wording or the time you received it. You could also expand on Mary's hard work and your own aspirations. Adding specific examples of her efforts or your study goals would make the response more compelling and detailed. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is coherent and easy to follow. Minor issues with fluency, such as the phrase 'Sage of Hrissift,' which seems out of place. Consider smoother transitions between ideas for improved flow.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The phrase 'put a lot of time on her studies' could be improved to 'put a lot of time into her studies' for better precision. More sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response.

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. The sentence structure is simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score.