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Band 4+: Describe that sometimes you did with someone

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There are many things I did last month. I was taking a spoken English course. I do this course to improve my English so I can speak fluently and without struggling. I took that course with my sister because she was also pursuing an English course because she wants to go abroad for work. Moreover, by doing spoken English courses, it will make it easier in the future for doing IELTS. I took that course last month because it was my summer holiday. I felt that rather than wasting my time at home, I should do something productive. Additionally, I feel happy now.

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There are many things I did last month. I was doing my spoken English course. I do this course to improve my English so I can speak English and without suffing. I done that course with my sister because my sister was also puracing English course because she want to go to abroad for workers. Moreover, by doing spoken English courses, it will make easier in the future for doing ielts. I done that course last month because the last month were my summer holidays. I felt that rather than wasting my time at my home, I should do. Additionally, I felt happy now.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

english: 4

that: 3

because: 3

month: 2

spoken: 2

doing: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

4.5

The answer is relevant to the topic and provides some details about the activity. However, it lacks depth and specific examples. The student could have elaborated more on the experience with their sister and the benefits of the course. For example, they could have mentioned specific topics they learned or how the course helped them overcome challenges. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

4.5

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some instances of repetition and awkward phrasing. The student uses some cohesive devices like "Moreover" and "Additionally," but they could be used more effectively to connect ideas. The pace is a bit uneven, with some sentences being rushed and others being drawn out.

Lexical Resource

3.5

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. For example, "suffing" should be "struggling." The student also uses some informal language like "workers" instead of "work." They could expand their vocabulary by using more precise and sophisticated words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The answer contains some grammatical errors, particularly in verb tenses and articles. For example, "I done that course" should be "I took that course." The student also uses some incorrect structures like "by doing spoken English courses, it will make easier." They could improve their grammar by paying attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

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