Band 6+: Describe the differences of kind of music of the young people anh older people.

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer directly addresses the question and presents a clear comparison between the music preferences of younger and older generations. To improve, consider providing more specific examples of music within each genre and elaborating on the reasons behind the generational differences in musical taste. Adding a concluding sentence summarizing the key differences would also enhance the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and unnatural phrasing, such as "Starting with music for generations is like us in ADM." The structure could be improved by using clearer topic sentences and transitions between ideas. More precise language would enhance fluency. For example, instead of 'make up city present,' use 'are very popular.'

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The use of 'ADM' without explanation is unclear. More precise vocabulary would improve the score. Instead of 'these generations are not well known,' use 'these genres are unfamiliar.' The phrase 'making it is the most popular music' is slightly awkward; consider 'making it the most popular music.'

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence structure is often fragmented and unclear. For example, 'Meanwhile these generations are not well known among the older generation' is grammatically incorrect. The use of articles is inconsistent. More accurate and varied sentence structures are needed. The phrase '30, 43 of them, the same of them' is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Consider rephrasing to '30 to 43 percent of them prefer it.'