Band 5+: Describe your best friend.

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question, but lacks detail and depth. Consider expanding on your friend's personality and your relationship. Focus on specific examples to illustrate your points. Avoid including unrelated information, such as your own study problems.

The answer is coherent, but the inclusion of "I have problems with my studies" feels like a non sequitur. The description is slightly disjointed; smoother transitions between sentences would improve fluency. Consider adding more descriptive details about your friend's personality and your relationship.

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. 'Beautiful green ears' is an error; it should be 'eyes'. More descriptive adjectives and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Try to use more sophisticated vocabulary to describe your friend's personality.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors ('green ears' instead of 'green eyes'). Sentence structures are simple. Using more complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score. Consider using relative clauses or participial phrases to add more detail.