Band 6: descried a place where the air was polluted (User-Submitted IELTS Speaking Answer)

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When it comes to a place I visited where the air was polluted, the first one that comes to my mind is Vung Tau Beach. If I'm not mistaken, the last time I went there was 5 years ago. I went there with my family, and I had a lot of bad experiences. Therefore, our family didn't go there to travel. So, let me give you a little detail about the situation in Vung Tau Beach. We booked our hotel in Vung Tau Beach with a view to watch the sea. I was very happy and excited until we checked in and opened the window. A bad smell came into our room. It smelled very badly and like rotten eggs. We were very uncomfortable and asked the staff for help. Meanwhile, I went to the beach to walk, and I found many seafood species washed ashore, and the situation was dire. In addition, there were many waste products along the coast where tourists lived. Pollution from the water resources leads to air pollution, creating an unpleasant environment. Because of this, I no longer want to travel there. In the future, I think I will return to travel again because perhaps the area will develop.

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When it come to a place I visited where the air was polluting. The first one that reach to my mind is Vung Tau Beach. If I’m not mistaken the last time I came there was 5 years ago. I went there with my family and I had a lot of pet experience. Therefore, our family didn’t go there to travel. So, let I will give you about Evolution in Vung Tau Beach a little details. We hide our hotel in Vung Tau Beach with a vision to watch the sea. I am very happy and excited until check in and open the window. A pet smell came into our room. It smell very badly and lit the rotten ass. We are very uncomfortable and have asked the staff to have a meanwhile. I went to the beach to work and I found out many seafood species were drifted as true and the situation they died. In addition, there are many ways taught on the cost of tourist living. Pollution from the water resources leads to pollution from air, re-aiding un-glycin other. And from there I have no longer go there to travel anymore. In the future, I think I will come back there to travel again because perhaps with the development area.

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