Band 7+: Did you walk more when you were at school?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly addresses the question and provides a clear comparison between walking habits during school days and the present. The explanation is logical and easy to follow. To further enhance the answer, you could add more specific details or examples to illustrate the differences in your walking habits.

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and awkward phrasing. Improve by practicing speaking more smoothly and connecting ideas more logically. For example, avoid using 'so' multiple times in a single sentence.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using 'back in the day' is fine, but consider more varied expressions. To improve, focus on learning synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to daily activities and physical activity. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'I can walk very much' (should be 'I could walk a lot') and 'I'm so rare to walk' (should be 'I rarely walk'). Practice using correct verb tenses and adverbs of frequency. Also, 'working adult' is acceptable, but 'a working adult' is grammatically better.