Part 2

Band 6+: Discuss about future job you want to do

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Well, I would like to express my thoughts regarding the future job I want to pursue, which is becoming a mechanical engineer. First and foremost, an important reason is that it suits my mind and my skill set. For instance, I really enjoy operating machines and computers and working with ATC. On the other hand, another important reason is that it involves problem-solving and creativity, which I really love. Moreover, the most important point is that this profession offers a lot of better opportunities. All in all, these points explain why I want to become a mechanical engineer. My personal view is that this profession will have high demand in the future, and that's it. I hope you better understand my views, which hold special significance. Thanks.

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Well, I would like to express regarding future job you want to do which is becoming a mechanical engineer. First and foremost, an important reason is that it suits my mind and my skill set. For instance, I really enjoy operating machines and computers and ATC. On the other hand, another important reason is that it includes problem solving and creativity which I really love. Moreover, most important point is that this profession offers lot of better opportunities. All in all, these points expressed to explain regarding why I want to become a mechanical engineer but my personal view is that it this profession can be this profession have high demand in the future in the future and that’s it I I I I hope you better understand my views that hold special significance. Thanks.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 4

which: 3

important: 3

future: 2

mechanical: 2

engineer: 2

reason: 2

really: 2

profession: 2

better: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic and provides reasons for wanting to become a mechanical engineer. To improve, consider elaborating on the specific opportunities the profession offers and providing more detailed examples related to problem-solving and creativity. Adding more personal experiences could also strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The response demonstrates some coherence, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('I I I I'). The organization is present with the use of 'first and foremost,' 'on the other hand,' and 'moreover,' but the flow could be smoother. To improve, practice speaking more continuously and avoid unnecessary pauses. Focus on connecting ideas more seamlessly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, but it lacks precision and flexibility. Phrases like 'suits my mind and my skill set' are somewhat vague. To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to mechanical engineering and job prospects. For example, instead of 'better opportunities,' you could say 'promising career trajectory' or 'ample opportunities for advancement.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are several errors. For example, 'regarding future job you want to do' should be 'regarding the future job I want to do.' Also, 'this profession can be this profession have high demand' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'this profession will have high demand.' To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and pay attention to accuracy, especially with articles, verb tenses, and sentence structure.

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