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Band 7+: Do all people need some nature?

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I would like to opine that all individuals living on Earth are in dire need of some nature. It is undeniable that nature plays an integral role in one's life. A person can't live fully without the presence of nature. Nature gives us so many benefits, such as a sense of refreshment, a sense of connection, and even a sense of disconnection from tension derived from work. Without nature, people can't live healthily. People can't live energetically without nature. One life can be considered dead.

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I would like to opine that all individuals living on earth are in dire need of some nature. It is undeniable that nature plays an integral role in one’s entire life. A person can’t live fully without the advent of nature. Nature gives us so many benefits. That’s so many benefits such as a sense of refreshment, a sense of connection, and even a sense of disconnection from tension derived from work without nature. People can’t live healthily. People can’t live energize Lee and without nature. One life can be considered dead.

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can't: 3

live: 3

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sense: 3

people: 2

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