Band 6+: Do people behave differently online compared real life

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear explanation for the difference in behavior. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the types of behaviors observed online versus in real life and providing specific examples to support your points.

The response is generally understandable, but there are some coherence issues. The ideas are somewhat connected, but the transitions could be smoother. For example, the shift from 'feel safe' to 'have nothing to do with them' is a bit abrupt. Try using cohesive devices like 'therefore,' 'however,' or 'in contrast' to improve the flow. Also, avoid abrupt topic changes.

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. The word 'pay' is used incorrectly and should be 'behave'. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to online and real-life interactions. For example, instead of 'feel safe,' you could say 'feel protected by anonymity' or 'experience a sense of detachment.'

The grammatical range is limited, and there are some accuracy issues. The sentence structure is quite basic, and there are errors like 'pay differently' and awkward phrasing such as 'they have nothing to do with them.' To improve, practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses. Pay attention to verb tense agreement and correct word usage.