Band 7+: Do people smile more when they are younger or older?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear opinion with supporting reasons. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons why older people might hide their emotions more effectively, and perhaps offer a contrasting perspective or nuance to the initial statement that smiling has nothing to do with age.

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor hesitations and a slight lack of flow. Using cohesive devices more effectively could improve the overall fluency. For example, you could use transition words like 'however' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using synonyms or more descriptive words could enhance the response. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'people,' you could vary it with 'individuals' or 'generations.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors that affect clarity. For example, 'Smile has nothing about age' could be improved to 'Smiling has nothing to do with age.' Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout the response.