Band 6+: do yo like advertisements?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is somewhat brief and could benefit from further elaboration. Consider providing specific examples of advertisements you find intrusive or manipulative, and perhaps contrast them with advertisements you find acceptable or even helpful. Expanding on the reasons behind your opinion would strengthen your response.

The answer lacks fluency. There are too many fillers and repetitions. The structure could be improved by removing the initial hesitation and streamlining the ideas. Focus on a clearer structure and smoother transitions between ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate, with words like "intrusive," "overwhelming," "manipulate," and "influence." However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and enhance the overall impact.

There are some grammatical errors, particularly in the phrasing. The sentence 'they are trying to manipulate and raise in on the consumer behavior to purchase the mind something that not really necessary to drive itself, sale' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on constructing grammatically correct and concise sentences.