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Band 7+: Do you agree or disagree that older people are ,the more patient they are?

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I disagree that older people are more patient. I think patience is more dependent upon the maturity and mental capacity level of an individual. I have seen many young people who have a great level of patience even when their dreams didn't come true. Moreover, I have also seen many adults behave like toddlers when their wishes didn't come true. So there's a huge difference, and patience is never directly related to age.

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I disagree that older people are more patient. I think the patients is more dependent upon the maturity and the mental capacity level of an individual. I have seen many young people who have great level of patience even when their dreams didn’t come true. Moreover, I also seen many adult people behave like toddlers when their wishes didn’t come true. So there’s a huge difference and the patient is never directly related to the patient’s level.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

patience: 3

have: 3

people: 2

level: 2

their: 2

didn't: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

This is an excellent response that directly addresses the question and provides a well-reasoned argument. The examples used are clear and support the main point effectively. Consider exploring the nuances of patience further, perhaps by mentioning different types of patience or situations where patience is tested.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-structured and coherent. There is a slight repetition in the phrasing ('I have seen many...'). Minor improvements in fluency could be achieved by pausing slightly more between sentences for better emphasis and natural rhythm. The conclusion is clear and concise.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The word 'patients' is used incorrectly in the first sentence. Using more precise vocabulary, such as 'tolerance' or 'forbearance' in addition to 'patience', would enhance the response. The phrase 'mental capacity level' could be replaced with a more sophisticated term like 'cognitive maturity' or 'emotional intelligence'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The sentence 'So there's a huge difference and the patient is never directly related to the patient's level' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Replacing 'the patient' with 'patience' would improve clarity. While the range of grammatical structures is sufficient, using more complex sentence structures would improve the overall score.

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