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Band 6+: Do you believe that traditional art forms are becoming obsolete in the modern world?

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From my perspective, traditional art forms are essentially becoming obsolete in contemporary society. One of the compelling reasons is the lack of awareness about traditional arts, and it's important because younger generations prefer digital and modern art. So, it is necessary for the government to fund traditional arts and promote them worldwide.

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From my perspective, traditional arts forms are essentially becoming obsolete in a contemporary society. One of the compelling reasons is that lack of awareness about traditional arts and it’s important because young generations prefer digital and modern arts. So it is necessary for government to funding traditional arts and promote traditional art worldwide.

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