Band 6+: Do you do much exercise?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides specific examples. Consider expanding on the types of exercise you do and the benefits you've experienced beyond weight loss. Focusing on the present rather than solely past experiences would also strengthen the response.

The answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks a smooth flow. While the main idea is clear, the structure could be improved by using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of repeating "every day," you could say something like, "I maintain a daily exercise routine." The anecdote about losing weight is relevant but could be more concisely told.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "planet tool" are unclear and detract from the overall impression. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of "too fat," you could use "overweight" or "obese." Instead of "thinner than these days," you could say "slimmer than I am now."

There are several grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "my old" and the awkward phrasing in several sentences. The tense is inconsistent at times. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.