Band 6+: Do you have a hobby?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is somewhat tangential to the question. While mentioning reading is related to hobbies, the answer doesn't directly address the prompt. Focus on clearly stating your hobbies and elaborating on them would improve the response.

The answer is coherent, but the phrasing could be more natural. The initial clause, 'Well, actually everyone has their own pursuits,' feels slightly unnatural as an introduction. Try to start with a more direct and concise statement of your hobby. The slight stumble in describing the book could be smoothed out with better pacing and clearer articulation.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While 'arbitrator' is a strong word choice, the phrasing around it and the description of the book could be improved. Consider using more vivid and descriptive language to enhance the impact of your response. Instead of 'meaningful and adoring,' try more precise words like 'thought-provoking' or 'charming'.

There are some grammatical inaccuracies. The phrase 'The books I am reading at the moment is...' is incorrect; it should be 'The book I am reading...' The sentence structure is a bit awkward in places. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring subject-verb agreement.