Band 6+: Do you have any career plans yet

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the question and demonstrates a clear career plan. However, the answer could benefit from more detail and elaboration on the steps involved in achieving this goal. Consider expanding on the challenges and rewards of self-employment and how your skills and experience will contribute to your success.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition ("in the future") could be avoided for improved fluency. The structure is logical and easy to follow.

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. Phrases like "a lot of money" and "my own boss" are simple. More precise and nuanced vocabulary would enhance the response. The ambition is clear, but the language used to describe it could be more refined.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The use of "wish" instead of "would like" in the first sentence and the repetition of "wish" in the second sentence are noticeable. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score. The sentence 'I wish I have all my supermarkets in the future' is grammatically incorrect.