Band 5+: Do you have any hobbies?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and demonstrates a range of hobbies. However, the answer could be improved by elaborating on the experiences with badminton and drawing, and by providing more detail on the other skills being learned. A more natural and fluent delivery would also enhance the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and unclear phrasing, such as "in his lighting." The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between hobbies. Practice speaking more smoothly and connecting your ideas with phrases like 'In addition,' or 'Furthermore'.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "gained experience" are better than "reached a good experience." Try to incorporate more precise and descriptive vocabulary to showcase a wider range. For example, instead of 'drawing pictures', you could say 'sketching' or 'creating artwork'.

There are several grammatical errors. "I'm often then not busy" is incorrect. The sentence structure needs improvement. The phrase "learning other hair" is nonsensical. Focus on accurate grammar and sentence construction. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice.