Band 5+: Do you have any hobbies or interests?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer directly addresses the question and lists hobbies, but it lacks elaboration and natural flow. To improve, consider providing more detail about why you enjoy these activities or how often you engage in them. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is short and lacks development. There is some repetition ('typing on computer' repeated). To improve, expand on each hobby with details or examples, and avoid repeating the same idea.

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ('typing on computer' used twice). Use more varied and precise words, e.g., 'surfing the internet' or 'working on the computer'. Also, 'hobbies' is plural but the verb 'is' is incorrect.

Grammatical errors: 'My hobbies is' should be 'My hobbies are'. 'typing on computer' should be 'typing on the computer'. The sentence 'I love typing of computer typing at computer' is garbled. Use correct subject-verb agreement and articles.