Band 7+: Do you like any foreign celebrity ?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is well-organized and coherent. It directly addresses the question and provides specific examples. Expanding on other celebrities or aspects of their appeal would further enhance the response.

The answer is mostly fluent, with only a few minor hesitations. The structure is coherent, but could be improved by using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of simply listing players, you could use transitions like 'In addition to...' or 'Furthermore...'

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate, but could be more precise and sophisticated. Phrases like "prodigy of football" are good, but more descriptive and nuanced language would elevate the response. The phrase 'plan of truth' is unclear and should be replaced with something more precise, perhaps relating to his training regime or competitive spirit.

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'I loved to was the level of football...' which should be 'I loved the level of football...' or 'I was amazed by the level of football...' The sentence structure is sometimes a bit simple. More complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score. The phrase 'I also prefer to the dedication' is grammatically incorrect and needs rephrasing.