Band 6+: Do you often buy clothes?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides sufficient detail. Consider expanding on the types of useful items you now purchase and providing more specific examples to illustrate your points. A more detailed explanation of how your mother's teachings influenced your spending habits would also strengthen your response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and repetitions ("long, long time"). The structure could be improved by using more concise phrasing and clearer transitions between ideas. For example, instead of "In adolescent time," consider "During my adolescence." The overall coherence is present, but smoother transitions would enhance the score.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "efficiently" and "adolescent" are used correctly, but more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. The phrase "useful things" is a bit vague; more specific examples would be beneficial.

There are several grammatical errors. "didn't buy code" is incorrect; it should be "didn't buy clothes." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward, such as "when I work in nowadays." The tense is inconsistent. More accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed to achieve a higher score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical abilities.